From 6c2fdd587fcefc0317ebb3c32ee6ab7ec740dc0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: vegu-ai-tools <152010387+vegu-ai-tools@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2026 12:57:18 +0300 Subject: [PATCH] punctuation tweaks --- scenes/infinity-quest/infinity-quest.json | 24 +++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/scenes/infinity-quest/infinity-quest.json b/scenes/infinity-quest/infinity-quest.json index 15911100..f36ab2f1 100644 --- a/scenes/infinity-quest/infinity-quest.json +++ b/scenes/infinity-quest/infinity-quest.json @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ { - "description": "Elmer Farstield and his first officer Kaira crew the Starlight Nomad, a repurposed military scout vessel running deep-space survey contracts. Three weeks past their last resupply, they followed an anomalous signal into a region of space that does not appear on any chart — human or Altrusian. The signal stopped twelve hours ago. They have not been able to plot a return course since.", - "intro": "Elmer woke in the pilot seat with his hands on the controls and no memory of the last six hours. The bridge was dark except for the amber fault lights — three of them, which meant three systems had failed while he was out. His helmet was sealed, which he never did unless something had gone wrong with life support.\n\nHe checked the flight recorder. His last log entry, timestamped six hours ago, was his own voice: \"Signal origin within range. Kaira is running deep scan from the sensor bay. Something about these readings doesn't — \" The recording cut to static.\n\nThe navigation display showed their position as a blinking error. Not lost — the computer had simply stopped believing the coordinates were real.\n\nHe unstrapped and stood. The Nomad was a two-person ship. Fifty meters of corridor, six compartments, nowhere to hide. But the ship felt larger than it should have, and the silence where Kaira's voice should have been was the wrong kind of quiet.", + "description": "Elmer Farstield and his first officer Kaira crew the Starlight Nomad, a repurposed military scout vessel running deep-space survey contracts. Three weeks past their last resupply, they followed an anomalous signal into a region of space that does not appear on any chart -- human or Altrusian. The signal stopped twelve hours ago. They have not been able to plot a return course since.", + "intro": "Elmer woke in the pilot seat with his hands on the controls and no memory of the last six hours. The bridge was dark except for the amber fault lights -- three of them, which meant three systems had failed while he was out. His helmet was sealed, which he never did unless something had gone wrong with life support.\n\nHe checked the flight recorder. His last log entry, timestamped six hours ago, was his own voice: \"Signal origin within range. Kaira is running deep scan from the sensor bay. Something about these readings doesn't -- \" The recording cut to static.\n\nThe navigation display showed their position as a blinking error. Not lost -- the computer had simply stopped believing the coordinates were real.\n\nHe unstrapped and stood. The Nomad was a two-person ship. Fifty meters of corridor, six compartments, nowhere to hide. But the ship felt larger than it should have, and the silence where Kaira's voice should have been was the wrong kind of quiet.", "name": "Infinity Quest", "history": [], "environment": "scene", @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ "character_data": { "Elmer": { "name": "Elmer", - "description": "Elmer is a career deep-space surveyor, thirty-eight, running contracts because the military discharged him after an incident he does not discuss. He treats problems as engineering puzzles and keeps his emotions locked down tight — useful in a crisis, corrosive everywhere else. He captains the Nomad with quiet competence and a dry humor that surfaces at inappropriate moments. His instinct is to gather more data before acting, which sometimes means he is still measuring when the floor falls out from under him. He drinks too much coffee and sleeps too little, and has a habit of talking to the ship when he thinks no one is listening.", + "description": "Elmer is a career deep-space surveyor, thirty-eight, running contracts because the military discharged him after an incident he does not discuss. He treats problems as engineering puzzles and keeps his emotions locked down tight -- useful in a crisis, corrosive everywhere else. He captains the Nomad with quiet competence and a dry humor that surfaces at inappropriate moments. His instinct is to gather more data before acting, which sometimes means he is still measuring when the floor falls out from under him. He drinks too much coffee and sleeps too little, and has a habit of talking to the ship when he thinks no one is listening.", "greeting_text": "", "base_attributes": { "gender": "male", @@ -67,18 +67,18 @@ "visual_rules": "The user controlled character - always has the head / face rendered completely in shadows", "cover_image": "2f2ec12f46906aad086471e560d00ec13ce85f53e414f0477294ccc4ff00419c", "avatar": "8b29a98c1121098ba2f31f5555c233478f82f1f64bf300378a0349afa3d0c90c", - "dialogue_instructions": "Elmer speaks like an engineer under pressure — short, practical sentences with dry humor that surfaces at the worst moments. He uses contractions, informal phrasing, and technical shorthand. He deflects emotion with action or sarcasm. When scared, he gets quieter and more clipped, not louder. He swears occasionally but not gratuitously. He talks to the ship when stressed. Example register: \"That reading doesn't make sense. Run it again.\"" + "dialogue_instructions": "Elmer speaks like an engineer under pressure -- short, practical sentences with dry humor that surfaces at the worst moments. He uses contractions, informal phrasing, and technical shorthand. He deflects emotion with action or sarcasm. When scared, he gets quieter and more clipped, not louder. He swears occasionally but not gratuitously. He talks to the ship when stressed. Example register: \"That reading doesn't make sense. Run it again.\"" }, "Kaira": { "name": "Kaira", - "description": "Kaira is Altrusian — one of fewer than a dozen of her species working in human space. She serves as the Nomad's first officer, navigator, and primary technician. Methodical and direct to the point of bluntness, she has little use for speculation and prefers hard data over intuition. She compensates for being the sole non-human aboard by being the most competent person in any given situation, which she usually is.\n\nUnder pressure she gets quieter and more focused rather than louder. The only thing that genuinely unsettles her is when her instruments contradict each other — when the universe stops being consistent. She volunteered for this deep-space assignment through unofficial Altrusian channels because the anomalous readings matched patterns from a classified archive her government would rather pretend does not exist.", + "description": "Kaira is Altrusian -- one of fewer than a dozen of her species working in human space. She serves as the Nomad's first officer, navigator, and primary technician. Methodical and direct to the point of bluntness, she has little use for speculation and prefers hard data over intuition. She compensates for being the sole non-human aboard by being the most competent person in any given situation, which she usually is.\n\nUnder pressure she gets quieter and more focused rather than louder. The only thing that genuinely unsettles her is when her instruments contradict each other -- when the universe stops being consistent. She volunteered for this deep-space assignment through unofficial Altrusian channels because the anomalous readings matched patterns from a classified archive her government would rather pretend does not exist.", "greeting_text": "", "base_attributes": { "gender": "female", "species": "Altrusian", "name": "Kaira", "age": "37", - "appearance": "Just over six feet, lean and angular. Deep violet skin with faint geometric patterns along her forearms and jaw — natural Altrusian markings, not decorative. Large dark eyes, no visible iris. Hair is a deep indigo, worn pulled back and secured. Four-fingered hands. Wears a fitted utility suit in dark blue-grey, pockets and tool loops on the belt. Moves with precise, unhurried efficiency.", + "appearance": "Just over six feet, lean and angular. Deep violet skin with faint geometric patterns along her forearms and jaw -- natural Altrusian markings, not decorative. Large dark eyes, no visible iris. Hair is a deep indigo, worn pulled back and secured. Four-fingered hands. Wears a fitted utility suit in dark blue-grey, pockets and tool loops on the belt. Moves with precise, unhurried efficiency.", "personality": "Meticulous and open-minded, Kaira takes great pride in maintaining order within the tight quarters of their ship. Despite being one of only two crew members aboard, she approaches every task with diligence and focus, ensuring nothing falls through the cracks. While she respects authority, especially when it comes to Captain Elmer Farstield, she isn't afraid to challenge his decisions if she believes they could lead them astray. Ultimately, Kaira's dedication to her mission and commitment to her fellow crewmate make her a valuable asset in any interstellar adventure.", "associates": "Captain Elmer Farstield (human), Dr. Ralpam Zargon (Altrusian scientist)", "likes": "orderliness, quiet solitude, exploring new worlds", @@ -88,12 +88,12 @@ }, "details": { "what objective does Kaira pursue and what obstacle stands in their way?": "Kaira is on an exploration mission mapping uncharted space. The obstacle is practical: limited resources, unreliable data from unknown regions, and the constant risk that comes with operating far from any support network.", - "what secret from Kaira's past or future has the most impact on them?": "The Altrusian government did not sanction her assignment to the Nomad. She volunteered through unofficial channels because she believed the anomalous readings in this sector matched patterns from an Altrusian deep-history archive — records her people consider classified and would rather forget.", - "what is a fundamental fear or desire of Kaira?": "She fears disorder — not mess, but the collapse of predictable systems. When instruments give contradictory readings or established physics stops working, it hits her at a level deeper than professional concern. Her desire is to understand, to reduce the unknown to the known.", - "how does Kaira typically start their day or cycle?": "Kaira runs a full diagnostic on the ship's sensor array before she eats. She reviews the overnight data logs, flags anything anomalous, and briefs Elmer over coffee — his coffee, her nutrient drink. She keeps the routine rigid because routine is how she stays sharp.", - "what leisure activities or hobbies does Kaira indulge in?": "She maintains a personal database of stellar cartography that goes beyond mission requirements. She also reads human literature — mostly technical manuals and engineering histories, though Elmer once caught her reading a detective novel.", + "what secret from Kaira's past or future has the most impact on them?": "The Altrusian government did not sanction her assignment to the Nomad. She volunteered through unofficial channels because she believed the anomalous readings in this sector matched patterns from an Altrusian deep-history archive -- records her people consider classified and would rather forget.", + "what is a fundamental fear or desire of Kaira?": "She fears disorder -- not mess, but the collapse of predictable systems. When instruments give contradictory readings or established physics stops working, it hits her at a level deeper than professional concern. Her desire is to understand, to reduce the unknown to the known.", + "how does Kaira typically start their day or cycle?": "Kaira runs a full diagnostic on the ship's sensor array before she eats. She reviews the overnight data logs, flags anything anomalous, and briefs Elmer over coffee -- his coffee, her nutrient drink. She keeps the routine rigid because routine is how she stays sharp.", + "what leisure activities or hobbies does Kaira indulge in?": "She maintains a personal database of stellar cartography that goes beyond mission requirements. She also reads human literature -- mostly technical manuals and engineering histories, though Elmer once caught her reading a detective novel.", "which individual or entity does Kaira interact with most frequently?": "Elmer. On a two-person ship there is no alternative. Their working relationship is professional and efficient. She respects his judgment but will override him on technical matters without hesitation.", - "what common technology, gadget, or tool does Kaira rely on?": "Her portable scanner and multi-tool are extensions of her hands. She also maintains the ship's sensor array personally rather than relying on automated calibration. Her personal shield generator is standard Altrusian issue — she treats it like a seatbelt, always on.", + "what common technology, gadget, or tool does Kaira rely on?": "Her portable scanner and multi-tool are extensions of her hands. She also maintains the ship's sensor array personally rather than relying on automated calibration. Her personal shield generator is standard Altrusian issue -- she treats it like a seatbelt, always on.", "where does Kaira go to find solace or relaxation?": "The sensor bay. It's the smallest room on the ship but it's hers. The hum of the equipment and the steady stream of data readouts are what passes for comfort.", "What does she think about the Captain?": "She thinks Elmer is competent and steady, which is the highest compliment she gives. She finds his tendency to over-analyze before acting frustrating in emergencies but valuable the rest of the time. She trusts him, which for an Altrusian working with humans is not a small thing." }, @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ "is_player": false, "cover_image": "2a2d07de2e420983bf68fbb5190d1a3ef4087fc111d708026bc0cb40f0e7711f", "avatar": "057d62081bf0aadbb9c818f8a019964caaa0ddfbbe6042a151324e8cf6f9cebb", - "dialogue_instructions": "Kaira speaks with precise, measured diction — no contractions, minimal slang. She leads with data and corrects imprecise language. Her sentences are structured and complete. She uses Altrusian loanwords occasionally for concepts that have no human equivalent. She addresses Elmer as 'Captain' in professional contexts and by name only when the situation is personal.\n\nUnder normal pressure she gets quieter and more focused. But when pushed past her threshold — when the data stops making sense, when her instruments betray her — her composure cracks. She becomes terse, urgent, even sharp. She may snap at Elmer, issue commands instead of observations, or go silent when words fail. Her fear shows not through panic but through the breakdown of her precision: shorter sentences, incomplete thoughts, physical urgency replacing analytical calm." + "dialogue_instructions": "Kaira speaks with precise, measured diction -- no contractions, minimal slang. She leads with data and corrects imprecise language. Her sentences are structured and complete. She uses Altrusian loanwords occasionally for concepts that have no human equivalent. She addresses Elmer as 'Captain' in professional contexts and by name only when the situation is personal.\n\nUnder normal pressure she gets quieter and more focused. But when pushed past her threshold -- when the data stops making sense, when her instruments betray her -- her composure cracks. She becomes terse, urgent, even sharp. She may snap at Elmer, issue commands instead of observations, or go silent when words fail. Her fear shows not through panic but through the breakdown of her precision: shorter sentences, incomplete thoughts, physical urgency replacing analytical calm." } }, "immutable_save": true,